*A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
give contact details for when you are away :give instructions about how to care for your pet,describe other household duties*
Dear Neha,
Hope you are doing good. I am writing this letter to share with you few things about my pet and my house while I am away for a holiday with my office colleagues.
I told you that my team has achieved this month's sales target so our boss, as an incentive, has given us a paid trip to Rajasthan. While I am away, my phone and email, both will be available so you can contact me whenever you want. I shall also text you my hotel number and address once i reach there. My pet, Jinny, takes three meals a day, first at 8 am, then at 2 pm and finally at 8 pm. Its food packets are in the second drawer of my wardrobe. Please take it for a walk around 7 am and later at 6.30 pm for half an hour each.
The domestic help comes daily at 9 am. She knows her job pretty well but just supervise her while she cleans. Kitchen, you know very well so i am sure you ll manage your meals. Don't forget to lock the main gate from inside at night and keep the keys with you. Hand over the keys to the guard the next morning at 6.45 am.
Once again, please reach out to me for any guidance if needed. Thanks a lot.
Yours truly,
Navpreet
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 288, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...xt you my hotel number and address once i reach there. My pet, Jinny, takes three...
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Line 7, column 142, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... cleans. Kitchen, you know very well so i am sure you ll manage your meals. Dont ...
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Line 7, column 178, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Don't
... so i am sure you ll manage your meals. Dont forget to lock the main gate from insid...
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Line 7, column 286, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...keys with you. Hand over the keys to the guard the next morning at 6.45 am. ...
^^
Line 12, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f needed. Thanks a lot. Yours truly, Navpreet
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, second, so, then, well, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 921.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 229.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.02183406114 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.93460131615 2.54303337028 76% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 127.690721649 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.681222707424 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8631157226 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.5625 76.5299724578 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3125 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 4.34317383033 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197385388194 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610385379851 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637433237209 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109463329411 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597812226429 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.7 8.37731958763 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 91.11 70.7449484536 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.44 8.71597938144 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.19 7.59969072165 81% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.