Nowadays in many countries, people are following the latest fashion, hairstyles and so on. Why are they so influenced by fashion? Is it a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays globalisation plays a vital part on the international arena as it sets a great number of trends such as fashion and appearance. Due to this people are easily affected by this tendency as they always strive to look better and more prestigious than others and also follow their idols. To my mind, this tendency negatively influences men and women as leads to the disappearance of the individuality.
As for the first reason, people have always been creatures who wants to realize that their look attracts someone’s attention and people around envy. Fashionable look also improves one’s confidence and helps to be become popular among friends and fellows. For instance, according to the statistic in Russia, around 50% of people under 25 follow the latest trends as consider modern fashion, cosmetics and hairstyle as a sign of prestigiousness. Thus, the stylish appearance is an integral part of the attitude and individual’s position in the inner circle.
As for the second cause, people have always been influenced by the stars in almost all the spheres of everyday life. Politicians, models, actors and pop singers, they all pay tremendous sums of money to the most fashionable designers to look trendy. For instance, Selena Gomes spends more than 500.000 dollars every year to the woman who sews clothes for her. Therefore, in pursuit of celebrities, fans without any reason seek to purchase and dress the same clothes.
However, the above-mentioned reasons are not strong enough to ensue fashion, as men and women forget about the individuality and often wear clothes that does not suit them. Moreover, latest fashion trends requires a fortune of money that rapidly reduces the budget. For instance, the Olga Buzzova’s admirer improved his appearance via plastic operation to look like the singer. So surreal love to idols displaces the realistic attitude to the world.
To conclude, because of the excessive attention to fashion that expresses in the will to occupy a high position and closer to celebrities people behave irrationally and lose personality.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
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Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1758.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26347305389 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87948002485 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59880239521 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4291896869 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.875 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656579583318 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0292711393264 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116929382588 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228051895004 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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