Some people think that cars are the best way to travel in a city, while others think that bicycle is better.
Discuss both points of views and give your opinion.
In this era, people have been fascinating to travel by luxurious vehicle , which show their personality.some mankinds reckon that cars are the best way to travel in a metropolis , however individuals consider that pedal cycle is superior. I will discuss both view.
To embark with, many people are travelling by own vehicle,while other are used to with public transport. Many people perceive that car is a appropriate way to travel in town because, elsewhere available parking faclities. Apart from that, people can protect from sun light and can shield their scene pollution through. If people want to buy any thing they can because they have space in cars to put. For an examples, in government of Delhi has made rule - Ord even numbers sechems started in all automobiles , owing to that, every ones travel in car for shopping, enjoying car driving and visit new developed area.
On the hand , pollution has been increasing nowadays, owing to that some people believe that every one should travel by cycles. Traveling by pushbike, it is fruitful us - if people will used to with pedal cycle so helpful for declining contamination, also it help to make health body and people are having less diseases. For epitome is that , in the UK corona pandemic had been booming by leap and bounds due to fumes of automobiles, people of UK are used to travel by pedal cycle yet, it is help ful for not only decreasing pollution but also controlled corona virus.
In my opinion, people ought to use pushbike for short distence it is helpful for them mantene their weight and keep their figure healthy.
To conclude, travelling by car it will be good for them and some demerits, but easy rich the destination. However, travelling by pushbike it is lot of merits like less pollution and less noise.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, while, apart from, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1488.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89473684211 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6619677517 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582236842105 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.4352637194 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.461538462 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3846153846 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 63.0 5.01903807615 1255% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202149119922 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084315591546 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506589269134 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114706471376 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539691413946 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.