There is a public event coming up in your town. Write a letter to your friend who you think would be interested to take part in it.
In your letter
– Describe the event.
– Say why you think he/she would be interested.
– Suggest an arrangement to meet with him/her at the event.
Dear Sharon,
Hope to see a big smile on your face reading this as I got promoted as an Assistant Manager last week. And adding more fun to that, there is a Street Play Competition going to happen in my city Prince Edward Island in which I would surely want you to participate.
Let me describe everything about the competition as I read in the newspaper “Canada Times”.It is an event held for orphanage charity. It will be held for two days and there will be international groups participating in this. The competition results will be judged on the basis of multiple criteria such as acting, topic, voice pitch, etc. Though there is a nominal registration fee around 50CAD per team but we cannot ignore the cash prize amount which is 10,000CAD for that.
As I know you have been leading our college dramatics club and you have been participating in multiple acting competitions after that also . That’s when I thought you would be pretty much interested in this.
I would not disturb your personal space with your team members while the competition but once your play is over, I am not going to leave you for a single second. I will come to watch your play and after that we will hang around and then your stay is planned at my house. I am not going to spill any more beans here.
Waiting to see you soon.
Best Wishes
Nisha
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| 2020-07-14 | Nisha Oberoi | 56 | view |
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- There is a public event coming up in your town Write a letter to your friend who you think would be interested to take part in it In your letter Describe the event Say why you think he she would be interested Suggest an arrangement to meet with him her at 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sharon, Hope to see a big smile on your face rea...
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...ould surely want you to participate. Let me describe everything about the com...
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... I read in the newspaper “Canada Times”.It is an event held for orphanage charity....
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... amount which is 10,000CAD for that. As I know you have been leading our coll...
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...multiple acting competitions after that also . That’s when I thought you would be pr...
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...iple acting competitions after that also . That’s when I thought you would be pret...
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...d be pretty much interested in this. I would not disturb your personal space ...
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... then your stay is planned at my house. I am not going to spill any more beans he...
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... going to spill any more beans here. Waiting to see you soon. Best Wishes ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, second, so, then, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1136.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71369294606 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53764768264 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618257261411 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0185661429 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3846153846 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5384615385 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.30769230769 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239684691715 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076465329029 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06809725574 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12161486869 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511098155545 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.