some people says that young people are much influenced by their friends than their parents or their teacher do you agree or disagree .
it is a ubiquitous known that age-mate have unique understanding between each other. some people adhere that offspring have a great impact by their peer group rather than parents and teachers.I endorse the statement.This essay shall elucidate the reason behind my slant in the ensuing segments.
First and foremost, reason why youngsters have in influence their company.Youngster feel comfortable with their peer group.To be more precise,They can share their feelings with each other without any hesitation.Which make the strong bonding among them.Moreover,same generation make them up to date with modern era.This is also helpful for them to get information about their career opportunity and their taste.Which might be not possible under the guidance of teacher and parents as they think according to their age and generation time period.A survey conducted in 2019 for instance shows result,that hostel had a great influence by their age mate rather than other learner.They get success in their life with the advanced guidance of their peer group.Hence in this ers offspring have a more influence their company .
However, parents and master trainer also guide them nicely for their career.Some teenagers might be influence by their parents and teacher.Nevertheless, they did not totally rely on their on them due to the lackness of technical knowledge and generation gap.Which create the barrier with the youth and their elder.Not only this,they might be accept their parents advice on the front of them but afterward they implement only their friend advice.Which may be a more beneficial for them.For instance indian cricket team captain Mahinder singh dhoni's parents always force them to the get govt job where as their friends show them path according to his talent.Finally he became a captain of indian team,he won world cup with the help and the motivation of their friends.Thus friends have a vital part in the young generation life .
To recapitulate,I vementhly voch that although, parents and teachers are always well wisher of their children yet friend has essential influence on the young star's life.It is necessary for the holistic growth of individual.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 24.0651302605 212% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1830.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38235294118 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04162160505 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573529411765 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 68.0 20.2975951904 335% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 322.706925863 49.4020404114 653% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 366.0 106.682146367 343% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 68.0 20.7667163134 327% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.8 7.06120827912 295% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 39.0 5.01903807615 777% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37915682024 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.19191416583 0.084324248473 228% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102704962417 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230757645821 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521877052997 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.9 13.0946893788 289% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 2.46 50.2224549098 5% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.8 11.3001002004 264% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.11 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.91 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.78957915832 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 29.2 10.1190380762 289% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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