You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect.
Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter
correct the information in the article
explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information
suggest what the magazine should do about this situation
Dear Sir / Madam,
I am writing this letter pertaining the article ‘Best places of best towns’ which you published in ‘Deep World’ magazine of July 2020 edition. Inside that you mentioned about my town Ahmedabad’s best places but I would sorry to say this but you have very less information about my town. I would like to resolve the mistake and republish the article again.
Firstly, there are many places which would be visited once in Ahmedabad and you mentioned very less names. There are many famous places like Riverfront, Kankaria lake, Vastrapur lake, manekchok which you haven’t mentioned in the article.
Secondly, you have described that our town does not have any clubs then, you are wrong sir, because, we have 2 big club named Rajpath club and Karnavati club in our town. To summarise, I would like you to stop the further publishing of the magazine and edit the things by gathering full information about our town and then republish it again. For any question you can contact me through my email a@a.com or contact me on 9876543210.
I hope you would understand the graveness of misleading the people and would do the necessary changes at the earliest.
Yours Sincerely,
Sunny Mehta
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 63, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the best'.
Suggestion: of the best
...ter pertaining the article ‘Best places of best towns’ which you published in ‘Deep Wor...
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Line 3, column 97, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun names is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...nce in Ahmedabad and you mentioned very less names. There are many famous places lik...
^^^^
Line 3, column 195, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Kankaria lake, Vastrapur lake, manekchok which you haven’t mentioned in the artic...
^^
Line 4, column 117, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'club' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'clubs'.
Suggestion: clubs
...u are wrong sir, because, we have 2 big club named Rajpath club and Karnavati club i...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1018.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99019607843 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56044129153 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593137254902 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.3220696791 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.8 76.5299724578 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 4.34317383033 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223376841308 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849828819098 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572600159928 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11221139619 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0861478323613 0.0580467560999 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.