Some people believe that children should spend all of their time with their family. Others believe that this is unnecessary or even negative. Discuss the possible arguments on both sides, and say which side you personally support.
It is undeniable that parental influence is crucial for the upbringing of children. However, this is by no means clear that they should spend exclusive time in the family, as we will discuss in the following paragraphs.
On the one hand, spending as much time as with children allows parents to establish ground rules for behavior. As a result, it can be helpful for youngsters to absorb conventions and codes of conduct which they can follow in the future. Meanwhile, the absence of bullying, truancy and delinquency can be achieved through the availability of family hours, that also should reduce the risk of falling to victim crimes such as abduction and coming under influence of negative peer pressure.
On the other hand, in society a lot of families are dual income or where a parent is a breadwinner means he or she is away from the family for a longer period of time, it is inevitable that children cannot spend all of their time with the family. After-school childcare and child-minding are often used in these cases and can be a viable alternative, if managed properly. Equally, it seems children can also learn a considerable amount via being in a well-behaved environment with their peers, and letting them play with no supervision may be a benefit.
In conclusion, it is admittible that family time is essential for bonding and absorbing positive patterns of behavior. Nevertheless, children can get lots of advantages outside the family too by being in the safe environment with the absence of parental care.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1273.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.953307393 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89669312314 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575875486381 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.7309035844 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.3 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189598736035 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741041435182 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546688528227 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117215548211 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326860824965 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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