A friends of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/she has asked for your advice about studying this subject. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
Give details of the course you took at the university
Explain why you recommend the university
Give some advice about how to apply
Dear…,
I have heard that you are going to apply team work course that I had done last month in Tehran university. These course is presented solutions which members of team are able to work efficiently with each other. Also, they benefit from their knowledge and experiences during the course. In addition, the course is taught by expert teacher who has strong credentials.
There are several reasons that I would like to recommend Tehran university. Firstly, Tehran is a well-known university in Iran. Therefore, you can benefit an excellent research facility. Secondly, students who are done these course from Tehran university, they are more likely to have high career opportunities.
Base on my previous experience in applying, you can find all the details about apply the course step by step in Tehran university website. I suggest printing all the documents before applying. Moreover, I would be happy, if I could help you. You can contact me whenever you need.
I hope you will have perfect time in Tehran university.
Best regard,
Bahare
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 56, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ' the Best'.
Suggestion: The Best
...have perfect time in Tehran university. Best regard, Bahare
^^^^^
Line 7, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Tehran university. Best regard, Bahare
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 885.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14534883721 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7133354052 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651162790698 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5657289995 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.2142857143 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.2857142857 16.8248392259 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 4.34317383033 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146014160085 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475990343795 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443026883412 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0872021285239 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431418548667 0.0580467560999 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.7 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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