Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In order to achieve success with flying colors in sports, a number of people argue that it is crucial to be strong mentally than physically. However, I believe entirely that the most vital element that leads to victoria is being in the peak of condition.
On the one hand, mental health has been claimed as a potential impact which can definitely introduce or reduce restrictions on the capability of playing sports. When giving it athletes' best shot is the top priority to gain any achievements, a sportsperson can get fed up and start curbing his or her effort because of putting too much value on taking up exercise yet end up receiving nothing. Furthermore, failures can provoke irritability and serious exhaustion, and this will carry a high probability of risks. Nevertheless, being mentally strong assist sportspeople to foster the competitive spirit, and to obtain a win-at-all-costs attitude.
On the other hand, physical strength is the basis to progress rapidly in a sportsperson's career. In order to regard an individual as a master in the sport of just an ordinary figure who is more appropriate to be on the bleachers rather than competing, physical strength is the most influenced part. Accordingly, because of not being physically strong, a huge number of athletes used illegal substances, for example, performing-enhancing drugs to maintain their power and get the goal.
All in all, both mental and physical strength play an indispensable role in sports, yet I firmly hold the opinion that the latter is the most integral.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, furthermore, however, nevertheless, so, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15019762846 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14625002482 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632411067194 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.0993765538 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.3 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155744662912 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572434602235 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521222632622 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0946072349473 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469105890727 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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