As people rely more and more technology to solve a problem availabiliy of human to thinks for themselve will surely deteriorate.
Today, technology has become the part of human's daily life which make complicate things easy. However, some people's opposite to this view because they thinks that it would reduce the availability of human 's mind in this following i will explain how technology do not impact on human s mind and explain some technology which make our life easy.
Firstly, the development of the technology has created human s life more powerful and comfortable which reduce the time and more efficiency in the work because large number of machinery have done world with in few seconds. In fact in the past time when new innovation was not invented it expend many days for completing work .For example with the help of Aeroplane human can reach everywhere in the few hours. Secondly technology cover the all sector of the human beings like education . Student use calculator and laptop for study which do difficult calculation within few seconds as well as provide more accurate result than using of mid for calculation. Therefore technology do no only solve human's biggest problem in fact it make people s life more reliable and relaxed.
While, technology cannot impact on human s problem solving thinking cause of technology human have more time to invented new technology In the market the technology daily updated. Mobile hone is the example of the updating technology This phone is start from cell phone . After a few year it have become smart phone .With the help of smartphone pole can do face to face communicate and din banking transaction and so on So the availability of the human s thinking is improved by the technology.
According to point of view Human's thinking power do not deteriorded by the technology if technology does not exit life may be become more complicated
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'think'
Suggestion: think
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ility of human s mind in this following i will explain how technology do not impa...
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Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
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Line 2, column 254, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'innovation'.
Suggestion: innovation
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Line 2, column 289, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'expends'?
Suggestion: expends
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Line 2, column 325, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ector of the human beings like education . Student use calculator and laptop for s...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...sult than using of mid for calculation. Therefore technology do no only solve humans bigg...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'humans the biggest'.
Suggestion: humans the biggest
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Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...solve humans biggest problem in fact it make people s life more reliable and relaxed...
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...eople s life more reliable and relaxed. While, technology cannot impact on human s pr...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...logy This phone is start from cell phone . After a few year it have become smart p...
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Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun year seems to be countable; consider using: 'few years'.
Suggestion: few years
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Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...er a few year it have become smart phone .With the help of smartphone pole can do ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: With
... a few year it have become smart phone .With the help of smartphone pole can do face...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91304347826 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66896743313 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531772575251 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.359823918 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.545454545 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1818181818 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1818181818 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341264725374 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140833146728 0.084324248473 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0904074343709 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214148098523 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440813519245 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.