It is expected in the near future that there will be a higher proportion of old people compared to younger population in some countries.
Is it a positive or negative development? Give your opinion and examples.
It is true that due to medical advancements and increased awareness regarding the health in general, people would expect to live longer than ever before in the foreseeable future, and in many parts of the world, a larger proportion of the population would be constituted by more elderly people. In my opinion, the overall effects of such a trend would be negative.
From an individual perspective, as the populations of countries grow older, a variety of related problems can be anticipated. To begin with, ageing population would undoubtedly pose a greater financial burden on working adults, as the younger portion of society would be smaller and as such, less money would be received by governments in terms of taxes in relation to the size of the population. Hence, a feasible solution for local authorities would be to impose higher tax rates on working people, replenishing national budgets. At the same time, the youth will increasingly have to allocate more time looking after their relatives, as the elderly are more susceptible to illnesses, hindering them either to spend adequate quality time with their offspring or friends, or to take part in leisure activities as much as they might desire.
Alongside individual issues, on a macro scale, ageing population could bring about a range of negative consequences. Firstly, having fewer young professionals to replace the retiring population, nations would encounter the shortage of skilled manpower, impeding economic growth. This is perhaps why some countries, such as Germany and Canada, have previously embarked on immigration programs, taking efforts to attract a younger and more productive skilled workforce, bolstering their economy. The second large-scale drawback of such a trend would be the fact that if the rate of birth in a nation is higher than mortality rate, ageing population would lead to population boom during the course of time, posing more pressure on world’s natural resources, many of which are already on the brink of exhaustion and depletion.
In conclusion, it seems to me that various individual, governmental and environmental problems are certain to arise as people’s longevity increases.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 678, Rule ID: DURING_THE_COURSE_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'during'.
Suggestion: during
...opulation would lead to population boom during the course of time, posing more pressure on world’s n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, look, regarding, second, so, in conclusion, in general, such as, in my opinion, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1850.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36231884058 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97880773568 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620289855072 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.5028876802 49.4020404114 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 168.181818182 106.682146367 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.3636363636 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156263249417 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591315289009 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0314720428408 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0881488777504 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351150785269 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 13.0946893788 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.4 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.57 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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