Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction.
Do you agree or disagree?
A highly paid job is more valued than job satisfaction. I disagree with this statement because job satisfaction can lead to an increase in productivity and the employee enjoys their work which is not always true compared to an employee with huge pay scale.
The boost in productivity is definitely present when there is job satisfaction. When people are happy, they tend to do a better job and there are less faults in their deliverable. They do not get bored or lose concentration while working, this in return results in a better product. It was found in a research that there is a 40 percent increase in the productivity level if the employee has job satisfaction.
When an employee is has mental peace at his employment, they enjoy their day at their workplace. Having some enjoyment in life is very important because then time passes quickly. So, if someone has joy during their working hours, they will not feel burdened. There is no point in living a life that one does not enjoy. For instance, every elderly person will say their best part of life was during their childhood because they enjoyed that time.
In conclusion, I believe that a bigger salary will not guarantee a higher level of productivity nor will it result in joy compared to job satisfaction. I would like to say that employers should focus more on job satisfaction to get the most of an employee.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun faults is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...y tend to do a better job and there are less faults in their deliverable. They do no...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
...ts in a better product. It was found in a research that there is a 40 percent increase in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1136.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73333333333 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79551972906 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554166666667 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.915976867 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3846153846 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4615384615 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69230769231 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162735486815 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628313335444 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642492657893 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110753142345 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632014965159 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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