Question: Do you think it is better for students to work before their university study? Why? Use reasons and specific examples to support your choice.
taking gap years to work before applying higher education has been the priority of a multitude of students in recent years. some people hold their belief this duration do more harm than good. However, I argue this would be a future trend due to its benefit to the learners.
First and foremost, having a short term job before entering university or college will help to create a budget for the later study. Thank to this saving, students will no longer be disturbed by the anxiety of repaying their loan or the deep dependence of some certain organizations during their course, therefore, avoiding future burden. For example, a range of US employees at the age of forty still have trouble with the remaining debt which has existed for nearly twenty years since they were undergraduate. Moreover, the learner having already saved a bunch of money can afford for abundantly healthy food, club enrollment and other convenient services, which result in both their physical and mental strength, ultimately, leading to their high result certificate.
In addition, those students who have worked a few years will find little difficulty in adjusting to the university environment owing to their social skills resulting from work. As for integration, experienced students engaging the flexible communicating skill and good manner may easier be a part of the university community and have the opportunity to gain plenty of qualified relationships. having experienced some harsh circumstances in the previous years of working will raise students’ ability to evaluate and process problem as well. Consequently, those students are extremely ready to face any challenge in their academic institution to get closer to success.
In conclusion, it is uncontestable, the property and experience gaining from the work period will profusely facilitate the students’ lives. Although starting further education after working may take a few years of youth, I highly support this trend because of its outweigh advantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, as for, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1699.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37658227848 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90502020045 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645569620253 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8609893404 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.692307692 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3076923077 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53846153846 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195895343966 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686867367805 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0290768062215 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11420333782 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0243106696854 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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