TASK 2 Fossil fuel, such as coal, oil and natural gas, is extensively used in many countries
which cause harms to the environment. The use of alternative sources of energy, including
wind and solar power, however, is being encouraged in many countries. Is this a positive or
negative development?
A great threat is posed when fossil fuels are burnt as these emit a number of air pollutants
to the atmosphere. To minimise this, a lot of nations have started using other forms of
energy like wind and solar. This essay will bring forth how fossil fuel is posing a menace to
the environment and the use of alternate source of energy as a step towards as a positive
development.
Fossil fuel produce large quantities of carbon-di-oxide when burned and obvious
problems such as oil spills and smog filled air. They also cause more
complicated problems that are not so easy to see, like acid rain. These fuels trap heat in the
atmosphere which eventually lead to climate change, also known as global warming. To
exemplifying the same, in the United States, the burning of such fuels, especially in the
power and transportation sectors, is responsible for three-quarters of carbon emission.
Thus, burning of fossil fuel is perilous for every nation.
Alternate source of energy implies the energy other than fossil fuels. This includes energy
from wind, sunlight, waves, biomass, etcetera. Using such forms of energy, instead of fossil
fuel, will significantly decrease the total amount of greenhouse gas emissions which would
prevent stronger climate change impact and further help the countries to combat the
problem of pollution by controlling it and reducing the same. For instance, Germany has
become a world leader in renewable energy by producing enough electricity in the year
2018 to power every household in the country for that year. It has also set an ambitious
target to get 65 percent of their electricity from renewables by 2030. Thus, use of alternate
energy must be embraced.
To conclude, it will be irrefutable to say that tackling with result of using fossil fuel is a big
challenge and must be minimised. Alternatively, renewable sources of energy should be
encouraged as it will lead to positive growth for the nations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, thus, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1669.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26498422713 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1409801736 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586750788644 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8445856909 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.3125 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8125 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5625 7.06120827912 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 23.0 4.38176352705 525% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339479669426 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103771622364 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622325551321 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0832224655955 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583134399988 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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