Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Governments should spend more money in support of the arts than in support of athletics such as state-sponsored Olympic teams. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
"You can tell the ideal of a nation by its investment." Some people may think that the government should spend more money in support of the arts, while others consider that supporting athletes can gain more edges for not only themselves but for the country. Hence, in my opinion, professional athletes surely deserve more investment.
First of all, the funding can be seen as an appreciation for those who work strenuously. As professional athletes can suffer varieties of injuries frequently than the general public. The example can seem from the desiring motivation to dominate the fight-off competition, they must devote numerous hours drilling, suffering the tremendous pressure in mentally and physically. In other words, their needy of the medical resources are true indeed in the large amount. Accordingly, through the fund, diligent athletes are able to obtain comprehensive treatment and boost the body essence.
Secondly, if there is no investment, there is no international reputation. Take the renowned sports event, Olympic, as an example, it is an excellent opportunity that athletes can snatch the triumph for the country. People of which can gain morale from association with the inspiring representation and augment the patriotism. Besides, it is also a place that congregates people and enhances interaction among nations, establishing the close bond for further cooperation and communication. To be more concise, the value of prestige is far-sighted and definitely way over the short investment to the nation.
Admittedly, some people may argue that it is with more advantages for sponsoring the arts in the large portion. People can raise the aesthetic sense through partaking in various art exhibitions and concerts. In addition, by cultivating the greenery to the public, they can maintain their health via expiration in the organic environment. Nevertheless, the lush exhibition can be a huge amount of cost that only the middle class is able to afford. By contrast, all classes are favorable to obtain mental and physical satisfaction tangibly. Through participating in the sports event at an affordable price, following the promotion of athletes to exercise regularly and alter fitness.
To sum up, supporting athletes as an appreciation has far more benefits, such as enhance the prestige and promote sports activity, devoting to the nation. Consequently, I think the government should put more emphasis on athletes than the arts.
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Suggestion: sports'; sport's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, besides, but, consequently, first, hence, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, while, i think, in addition, such as, first of all, in my opinion, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 27.0 8.0752688172 334% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2096.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 383.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4725848564 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11314758028 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587467362924 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 648.0 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8734609764 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.8 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.15 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.9 5.45110844103 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178881945039 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0471830219042 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618957996094 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114373523181 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.084461200244 0.0645574589148 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 10.9000537634 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.01818996416 118% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 86.8835125448 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.