The system used for rubbish collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbors. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter
Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working
Explain how this is effecting you and your neighbors
Suggest what should be done about the problems
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing a letter to inform you about the problem that our neighborhood has been faced. We used to enjoy our neighborhood because it was clean and tidy. Since the collection rubbish machine is not working very well, the streets are full of garbage that it does not collect properly. Also, the collection rubbish machine make annoying sound that it does not allow residents to rest at night.
I would like to mention that since garbage are stored in boxes, it is more likely to contaminate the environment. Therefore, people who live in these area suffer from health problems. In addition, it causes several difficulties. For instance, cats and dogs find their food from these garbage and the streets become dirty.
I suggest that you send the requirement to purchase new machines or replace old machines with automatic system. Moreover, you should recruit some workforces to monitor new system. I hope you find it useful.
I am looking forward to reply my letter.
Yours sincerely,
Bahare past
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 144, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this area' or 'these areas'?
Suggestion: this area; these areas
...ironment. Therefore, people who live in these area suffer from health problems. In additio...
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Line 3, column 278, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this garbage' or 'these garbages'?
Suggestion: this garbage; these garbages
...nce, cats and dogs find their food from these garbage and the streets become dirty. I sugges...
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Line 5, column 22, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to replying'.
Suggestion: to replying
...u find it useful. I am looking forward to reply my letter. Yours sincerely, Bahare pa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 854.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99415204678 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59067627664 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.684210526316 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.9693561871 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.6923076923 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1538461538 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 4.34317383033 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230828847065 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636867341309 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044341222763 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0958275070695 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574890164757 0.0580467560999 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.77 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.