the growth of online shopping will one day lead to bankrupt all shops in towns and cities
do you agree or disagree?
Whilst some people are of the belief that the increase of the online shopping may force many shops to close or declare their bankrupting , others believe that their trade may survive. I believe that online shopping will be the coming trend and it will lead many shops to close their doors forever. This essay will manifest my opinion .
On the one hand, online shopping has many merits that can make life easier for many people. In other words, it a time and money saver to buy via the internet without the need to drive through traffic and go to malls for hours while you can have the same product by a screen touch. This can be exemplified through a survey which has been published last month in the New York Times shows that the online buying power has increased by almost 85% in the past few months which led to the closure of famous brands stores. Hence, online shopping has the greater influence in the trade businesses.
In addition to that, in the past few months, buying from home and without the need to leave your house spread widely. This can be further explained during covid 19 crisis, when almost the whole world had to stay home; curfew has been imposed. Therefore, the only way to purchase cloth, devices, tools, and food was through online shopping. As an illustration, purchasing via internet websites and applications saved humanity. Moreover, it enabled them to live a normal life during the pandemic.
In conclusion, the power of online shopping has shifted the balance from the hands of a few to the masses. Many people believe that the plethora of the merits that online shopping provides may lead to the bankrupting of some brands and stores around the world. I totally agree with that point of view.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70627062706 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27564604056 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561056105611 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8324148528 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0666666667 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244617544552 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824878757652 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0835199334482 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155097638695 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0955434026275 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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