Some people believe that children that commit crime should be punished. Others think that parents should be punished instead. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There are two different standpoints about responding to the consigning violation among population, a part of inhabitants claim that criminals should be punished even though they are young, when the rest opine that their parents should take this responsibility for their kids. Drawing the following paragraphs, I am going to take both sides into consideration and highlight my own opinion.
We may collide with myriad standpoints of government rules based on different factors such as type, level and condition of crime, and locations of country. Before establishing sanctions on someone judges observe reasons and details of crime, relying on them they conclude what punishment is more deserved. Surely, we may support first view of people as everybody is responsible for themselves despite of the age, and there are many types of penalties that can be established according to criminals’ age and rate of committed crime. For instance, in my homeland we may see young generation involved in blue collar job or house arrest as a punishment for their commitments since they have not matured yet with low level of breakings while there are some youths behind cages with nonsense penalties.
Moreover, showing agreement with letter claim might have its positives as well, since folks are the ones who nurture children, therefore punishing them can be a reason of crime deterioration. However, we should set only financial retribution according to level of crime their kids as there are two must-accepted factors, which I would outline. First is parent-child relationship since bird does what sees at home therefore parents’ role in nurturing children is necessary. Second is related to first standpoint, everyone is responsible for themselves so it may be wrong to punish parents for their children’s crime.
Personally I support first mentioned view with one stipulation, both should be punished if children are under 12 as they are not able make decisions by themselves and choose what is wrong and right while for those who are above 12 should take all responsibilities for their deeds.
By way of conclusion I pen down saying that above mentioned views, explanations and examples can outline my position about this statement.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 400, Rule ID: DOES_NP_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'see'?
Suggestion: see
...child relationship since bird does what sees at home therefore parents’ role in nurt...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1882.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28651685393 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96999258459 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601123595506 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.2814054585 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.833333333 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6666666667 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273563538159 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.097054233092 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604521458602 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145354048484 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0777349958167 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 400, Rule ID: DOES_NP_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'see'?
Suggestion: see
...child relationship since bird does what sees at home therefore parents’ role in nurt...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1882.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28651685393 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96999258459 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601123595506 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.2814054585 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.833333333 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6666666667 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273563538159 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.097054233092 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604521458602 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145354048484 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0777349958167 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.