The table below gives data on the hour of leisure time per year for people in Someland.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table data shows how people who have different ages spend their leisure time in Someland during a year.
Overall, the amount of leisure time varies notoriously in the seven groups of ages for the six activities presented for their free time.
Turning to social activities, it can be seen that teens and 20s consumed 700 hours socializing with over 4 people, whereas 50s, 60s and 70s maintained a constant number of hours (25 hours).
Talking about exercises and sport, it is seen that people in 60s and 70s do not use hours of their leisure time. But, on the other side, teens dedicate 450 hours for that activity.
According to the table, teens and 70s are the group of people who dedicate more hours to watching tv/videos in comparison with the people aged between 20s and 60s. It is the same with the individual exercise (both age with 150 hours). On the other hand, cinema is the least activity that all of the ages consider doing (no more than 100 hours). For its part, home entertainment ranges from just over a thousand hours for teenagers and retired people and average of 600 hours for the rest age groups.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 287, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...hand, cinema is the least activity that all of the ages consider doing no more than 100 ho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, whereas, talking about, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 929.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66834170854 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29544306445 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587939698492 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8958723888 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.222222222 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1111111111 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218606926237 0.215688989381 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958022798748 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707890101037 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13599266997 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610237840445 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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