In some countries, owning a home rather than renting a house is very important for people. Why might this be the case?
Do you think it is the positive or negative position?
In many countries such as Vietnam or Thailand, people prefer buying a house to staying rent. In my opinion, I strongly believe that this is a negative development because of many reasons.
In fact, there are many causes for this problems. First of all, they could love the stability of the formal house. If you are staying in a rent house, you could be kicked out at any moment. Furthermore, in the opinion of most people in Vietnam, they believe that a steady house will be the premise for them to success in their career or having a homey and happy family. Secondly, a house could be a profit for it’s owner. Indeed, with a small flat or 2-floor-house, you could live there, rent it as a roadside diner or an office. Of course, it will increase the income of the owner a bunch of money. Moreover, a house could be sold with profit after many years, when the cost of land in metropolitans of every country is booming powerfully every years.
However, I believe that it’s a negative development for two following reasons. First of all, it might be inconvenient for your family members, specially if your family is multi-generations. Clearly, it’s pretty tough to find the house that is convenient for all of your family members to go to school or go to work at a reasonable prices. Furthermore, if you have to drop them off at school, while your son’s school is on the different routes to your office, it would be such a nightmare for most people. Secondly, a house could be a profit, but it could also be an economic burden. The prices of the house in most city is raising unstoppable, while the average salary of most citizen is not enough for a low-price house. To solve this problems, they will rent money from the bank in order to buy that house. The long duration of the loans, with the high interest rate and the original might be the reason of unwanted stress of most first house buyers.
In conclusion, I believe that most of people have their own reason of spending money in a house rather than staying in a rented home: however, it’s clearly a negative position.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: these
.... In fact, there are many causes for this problems. First of all, they could love...
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Suggestion:
... a profit for it’s owner. Indeed, with a small flat or 2-floor-house, you could l...
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Suggestion: prex; price
...to school or go to work at a reasonable prices. Furthermore, if you have to drop them ...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
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... enough for a low-price house. To solve this problems, they will rent money from the...
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Suggestion:
... and the original might be the reason of unwanted stress of most first house buye...
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...uyers. In conclusion, I believe that most of people have their own reason of spending money...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, in fact, of course, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1720.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58666666667 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5937552356 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485333333333 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7476258718 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5263157895 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7368421053 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.10526315789 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250020927982 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810532565416 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488084998128 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171573430632 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290580426356 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.