You visited another country to study, but are now unable to complete the course. Write a letter to your teacher. In that letter:
Thank him/her.
Give reasons as to why you left the course.
What you enjoyed during the course.
Dear Mr. Brown,
I am writing this letter to express my gratitude for the best coaching that you provided me during an English course which I joined five months back.
I am highly grateful to you to make this language facile for me which I was extremely hesitant to speak at the beginning, also it seemed impossible for me to learn it. This happened just because of your unique teaching methods and your belief in me.
Unfortunately, I have returned to my country without completing this course since I have secured a job of a hotel manager at one of the renowned hotels "The Taj". As a matter of fact, I appeared in an online interview for this post, and to my fortunate, I was selected owing to my good command at the English language.
I really enjoyed this course because of the ambience of your institute and flexible hours. These hours allowed me to do a part-time job, and I was able to carry my own expenses. Thus this course also taught me to be self-dependent.
I would like to thank you from the bottom of my heart once again.
Yours sincerely,
Gaurav
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 179, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...nd I was able to carry my own expenses. Thus this course also taught me to be self-d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, really, so, thus, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 901.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64432989691 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65207563139 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613402061856 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7850364488 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182929172124 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757426383252 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580725633282 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109695173142 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547848517698 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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