Some people think that the public libraries are no longer necessary, other believe that public libraries still perform useful functions.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People have conflicting views about the usage of public libraries in this modern world. While there are several benefits of these places for different individuals, I think that utility of libraries are very limited nowadays, and they are not required in this technology driven society.
On the one hand, state owned libraries are still beneficial for people in many ways. Firstly, some orthodox people still find libraries, a useful place to read paper-back edition of books, and are not interested in switching to electronic mode of reading. For instance, my grandfather still visits local library on regular basis to read his favorite history related books, and even after several attempts from my side; he is not ready to try digital books, as he finds reading real paper based books more easy and convenient to read. Secondly, students can find a quiet and lonely place to study in these libraries in the middle of this busy world, where they can concentrate on their studies without getting disturbed. Moreover, curriculum books are not easily available in digital formats online and local libraries are still a great place to find these paper based editions of books, thus proving to be a useful resource for students.
On the other hand, I believe that general libraries have very limited utility for mankind after the advent of technology. Younger people are downloading and reading their favorite books on various gadgets, like Kindle, from the comfort of their homes. This way they do not have to visit far-off places, like public libraries, and they can pursue their hobby of reading in a more comfortable manner, anytime during the day. Furthermore, people nowadays are getting more inclined towards visual media to increase their knowledge rather than being dependent only on physical books. Various online resources, such as You-Tube, is providing useful information to younger generation in the form of documentaries, increasing their understanding of a subject in a much practical and enjoyable way, as compared to books that are only limited to reading.
In conclusion, although there are several advantages of public libraries to some sections of the society, in my opinion, these places virtually have no place in this modern technological world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Maybe you should omit the article "a", leaving only 'much'.
Suggestion: much
...ing their understanding of a subject in a much practical and enjoyable way, as compare...
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Line 5, column 846, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...books that are only limited to reading. In conclusion, although there are severa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, thus, while, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1912.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23835616438 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66710042134 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528767123288 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 612.0 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.2678746546 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.076923077 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0769230769 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6153846154 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207711658225 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845373539534 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604558770608 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141969133467 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378829119891 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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