You and your brother made a holiday plan recently for a week, but he will not be able to accompany you.Write a letter to your friend in which:
explain the holiday plan.
explain why your brother will not able to join.
Invite the friend for this trip.
Dear Sam,
I hope you are fine. It's been ages that we have met and had fun together. I have a news for you! Me and my elder brother has planned a trip of seven days, scheduled next month, to Thailand. In this trip, both the major cities- Bangkok and Pattaya- are included. Booking for accommodation has already been done, other than flights.
Unfortunately, my brother will not be able to accompany me on this trip due to an urgent official meeting next month. As you know, this is his promotion year, and this meeting is very crucial for his future career.
I was thinking, why don't you accompany me on this trip? We would have fun together and remember our college days. I know you like tropical weather. We will enjoy sandy beaches, soaking in the sun together. Moreover, it's your winter holidays. Don't worry about the expenses as it will be covered by me.
Hope to receive a positive response from you soon.
With love,
Gaurav
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 82, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'news'.
Suggestion: news
...e have met and had fun together. I have a news for you! Me and my elder brother has pl...
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Line 7, column 21, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...s future career. I was thinking, why dont you accompany me on this trip? We would...
^^^^
Line 7, column 217, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... soaking in the sun together. Moreover, its your winter holidays. Dont worry about ...
^^^
Line 7, column 243, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Don't
...er. Moreover, its your winter holidays. Dont worry about the expenses as it will be ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 784.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4003672716 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.690476190476 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.8444887824 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 52.2666666667 76.5299724578 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.2 16.8248392259 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.46666666667 4.34317383033 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271677743343 0.216113520407 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753279852186 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589401122107 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146191970653 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571675483901 0.0580467560999 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 8.37731958763 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.62 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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