The material progress and well-being of one country are necessarily connected to the material progress and well-being of all other countries.
Every country has different sorts of needs that are needed to be fulfilled. But a country working only alone in this modern concept of global village sounds dubious and backdated. To flourish as a country, one not only has to look after its own economical growth but also the others because without the help of another a country simply cannot ascend. It is, therefore, clear that progress and growth of a country is conspicuously related to the prosperity of another country.
Human civilization has been formed with one cardinal thought in mind is to grow together. In spite of the fact that in this modern era there are many countries, each divided by borders, however, they need to work together if they want to prosper as a country. Without having a good relation with trade with another country, a nation can never fulfill its needs. For instance, the European Union was built solely based on the thought to close down the gap between surrounding countries and making the monetary transaction a lot easier. In fact, there are a lot of other organizations like SARC in the South-Asia, where countries with joining borders get extra benefit and less cost while importing and exporting. All were made for the purpose of sharing goods from one country to another.
Moreover, a country itself can never produce all the things that it needs. For example, one country may have a bounty of oil reserve but suppose, it does not have gold mines or coal mines. That country can trade with another country that has an abundance of coal and willing to exchange for oil. There may be plenty of things a country may not have. The reason can be geological, for example, the soil of the country may not be suitable for good agricultural production or it could be they lack natural resources as mentioned earlier. The reason could also be man power related. One country may have a huge population and may look for exporting their man power where another could be looking for humans for hire. Countries like Bangladesh, India and other African countries are exporting their human resources to other countries like Qatar, US, Singapore etc. This not only pulls off the pressure of having excess population in one country but also utilizes the man power and get remittance.
However, it is not always true that the prosperity of one country would relate to the burgeoning of another country. A country may not have any economical or political friendship with another country. In such cases, even if one country improves itself by doing many revolutions, the other country will be affected. Countries like the US and Iran or the US and Afghanistan have enmity between them and thus trade is off-limits. As there is no economic trade between them, it is hard for the other country to get the benefit. Moreover, a country may be blessed with great fertile lands and other natural resources, it can definitely be very self-sufficient with itself. Countries like Australia and the US are great examples. Although they have good trade relations with other countries, they themselves produce most of their needs by themselves.
To summarize, it is clear that a country may have a self-sufficient sustainable system but even they have to take help from others to fulfill all their needs. By every nation working together, the world can certainly be made a better place where everyone can grow together.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 246, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
... one not only has to look after its own economical growth but also the others because with...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, as to, for example, for instance, in fact, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 12.4196629213 185% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 58.6224719101 125% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2830.0 2235.4752809 127% => OK
No of words: 575.0 442.535393258 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92173913043 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.89685180668 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61807011276 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 215.323595506 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.441739130435 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 882.9 704.065955056 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.2370786517 143% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0402815475 60.3974514979 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5862068966 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8275862069 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.37931034483 5.21951772744 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292625183304 0.243740707755 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0973693740915 0.0831039109588 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556184343664 0.0758088955206 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179289113053 0.150359130593 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638587675126 0.0667264976115 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 100.480337079 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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