The real talent of a popular musician cannot accurately be assessed until the musician has been dead for several generations, so that his or her fame does not interfere with honest assessment.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Music is a form of art which brings people together. It is one of those art forms which can directly touch your heart with minimum efforts. Over the years, music has proven to be my own companion whenever I was feeling blue; it helped me find solitude and peace in this chaotic place called 'The Outside World'. The prompt suggests that the real talent of a popular musician cannot accurately be assesed until the musician has been dead for couple of years. It believes that the musician's fame and influence interferes with the honest assessment, thereby tempering the actual rating of the music. I would like to disagree with the assertion by discussing few of points given below.
If a musician is really talented, most of his creations will always be above par. Music is undoubtedly a combination of hardwork and talent; and the one who devotes himself to this mellifluous art form will always make the most out of it. For example, a world renowned musician and artist A. R. Rehman has produced many soundtracks which are lauded all around globe. His fame and his influence has nothing to do with the assessment or quality of the music he is producing. The predilection towards his songs will last eternally.
Similarly, famous american music bands such as Queen or The Beatles were extremely famous in 1900s, and the music which they produced is still everyone's favorite. Another musician called AVICII, who is not among us, had created really good music when he was alive, and his music is still appreciated. Famous american band, Linkin Park, is still fan's favorite after Chester Bennington's sudden demise. He is still recognized as one of the best musicians to live.
However, it must be acknowledged that this case is not true for everyone. Many musicians like XXXTentacion were at top of their respective careers and created some really lousy music. Their grasp and knowledge of music was limited to attract fame and money. There are several other examples where musicians produced hit songs only because of their popularity and not because of the talent and quality. Thus, the assertion stands true in such cases.
On the other hand, artists who worship music and have devoted themselves to the growth of their art form will never put themselves in such a position where they will have to face criticism. Also, in this era of internet, where online trolling is extremely common and internet is nothing but a platform where you get 'mean' comments for anything you do, people will always state their true opinions regardless of the fact that the musician is famous or not. If one likes the music, he will praise it, if not, he won't. Thus, death of a popular musician isn't the requirement to assess their work with honesty.
In conclusion, I would like to say that assertion is not entirely true and music is not only about the fame of the musician but also about dedication and perseverence and devotion. Many popular musicians who have put their heart and soul into it are more likely to be remembered till the end of time, and thus their death won't change their affability and quality of the work they have produced.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 478, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'musicians'' or 'musician's'?
Suggestion: musicians'; musician's
...r couple of years. It believes that the musicians fame and influence interferes with the ...
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Line 5, column 91, Rule ID: IN_1990s[1]
Message: The article is probably missing here: 'in the 1900s'.
Suggestion: in the 1900s
...en or The Beatles were extremely famous in 1900s, and the music which they produced is s...
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Line 9, column 550, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...wont. Thus, death of a popular musician isnt the requirement to assess their work wi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, similarly, so, still, thus, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.5258426966 154% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 14.8657303371 175% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 33.0505617978 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2606.0 2235.4752809 117% => OK
No of words: 539.0 442.535393258 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83487940631 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81833721656 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47303221821 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 273.0 215.323595506 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506493506494 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 816.3 704.065955056 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.4384939532 60.3974514979 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5185185185 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.962962963 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 5.21951772744 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 10.2758426966 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255605060835 0.243740707755 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719827650365 0.0831039109588 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715392109519 0.0758088955206 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132590854724 0.150359130593 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0715561335925 0.0667264976115 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.1392134831 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 100.480337079 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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