AT PRESENT TIME THE POPULATION OF SOME COUNTRIES INCLUDES A RELATIVELY LARGER NUMBER OF YOUNG ADULTS, COMPARE WITH NUMBER OF OLDER PEOPLE. DO THE ADVANTAGES OF THIS SITUATION OUTWEIGH THE DISADVANTAGES
Nowadays, Youth plays an important role in their nations when it comes to countries' development. I am of the belief that If any country had a large number from its citizens is adult, I would be better; Therefore, I believe that the advantages of this surpass the disadvantages. In this essay, my point of view will be demonstrated before reaching the conclusion.
On one hand, countries have not more old people maybe suffers from lack of experience. In other words, Not only do the elder man and women give the future generation the knowledge but also support and help them to acquire the required information for their success. For instance, In 2017, an article has been published by The Economist showed that the development of any countries If it has 50% of its population is elder people. Hence, These countries should keep the balance between both generations.
Despite the idea mentioned- above it is still assumed that in the modern era, Youth has an integral part from the economic growth of the developed nations. As an illustration, the future generation has the knowledge of Today's technology; they can deal with the modern productive means which play an indispensable role in social growth. In addition to that, youngsters have the spirit of challenge and success which aid to make creativity at work. Furthermore, They Have to proof themselves during work; It effects on the quality of their output. For example, Canda is an example of a country which has good development in many life aspects because the number of Youth is more than old people.
It can be concluded that If the country has more young people than old one, It will be better; I am of the view that Its merits outnumber demerits. Therefore, Authorities should encourage future generation and assist them to participate in economic and political life.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95469255663 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7937819872 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566343042071 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5401825531 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.357142857 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0714285714 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132874281023 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0420074260033 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400817211636 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0802435932257 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326776164206 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 364, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...strated before reaching the conclusion. On one hand, countries have not more old...
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Line 3, column 381, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ed that the development of any countries If it has 50% of its population is elder...
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Line 3, column 505, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...p the balance between both generations. Despite the idea mentioned- above it is ...
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Line 5, column 585, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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.... For example, Canda is an example of a country which has good development in ma...
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Line 5, column 664, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... many life aspects because the number of Youth is more than old people. It c...
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Line 5, column 697, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...mber of Youth is more than old people. It can be concluded that If the country...
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Line 7, column 25, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ld people. It can be concluded that If the country has more young people tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95469255663 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7937819872 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566343042071 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5401825531 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.357142857 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0714285714 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132874281023 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0420074260033 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400817211636 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0802435932257 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326776164206 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.