People are having more and more sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons? What are the solutions to make people drink less.
It is considered that sugared beverages are used more often than other drinks by people nowadays. This essay will outline a number of causes for this trend and various solutions to help tackle this issue.
First of all, people have a tendency to take more sugar-based drinks because of an attractive flavour. The ingredients in these beverages such as caffein, syrup, have stimulated people’s taste absolutely, especially children, so that they find it more rousing than other sugar-free drinks. Another reason why people usually take more sugary beverages is that they believe this kind of drinks is cheaper than others and they do think that it makes them more energetic when using. For clarification, the price of sugar-based drinks in market costs less than other beverages such as organic milk or sugar-free tea, so they have a trend to use it more often. People have misunderstood that drinking more and more these kinds of drink will make them full of energy, but they don’t know that taking advantages of it too much will lead to incurable disease like diabetes.
To solve this problem, propagandizing to people who taking much sugared drinks about all the unforeseeable effects that this kind of drinks causes for. This might be one of the possible solutions that some medical organizations can do to make people drink less. In other words, if this issue is outbreaking, government can increase the price of sugar-based beverages steadily to limit the number of people drinking. This is also an achievable way out to assist people in not spending much money on this kind of beverages.
In conclusion, this essay points out several reasons why people have an upward tendency on using sugary drinks and indicates numerous possible resolutions to help handle this outbreak.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 376, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... price of sugar-based beverages steadily to limit the number of people drinking. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, in conclusion, kind of, such as, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08503401361 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67135027056 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534013605442 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8821179645 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.583333333 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.425796073671 0.244688304435 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.193638041389 0.084324248473 230% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0940307854547 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250640284895 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108037294608 0.056905535591 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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