Some sports are extremely dangerous but many people still like them very much, Why do people take part in dangerous sports? Give some suggestions on how to deal with these dangers.
some games are too much risky but many of people even love them so much, SoPeople take part in all the dangerous sports. In recent years we have seems a considerable rise in dangerous or extreme sports.. this essay shall discuss some of the main reason why people engage in such a sport and suggest way in which some risk involved in such sports can be reduced.
The major course why people go for dangerous sport is that get the excitement of time. do you like taking risk. do you like to challenge their abilities and potentials. they feel satisfaction why they come face-to-face with fears while bungeejumping, rock climbing and so one. In additions Amma going through a a previous experiments gives them courage and confidence to face the hard heartless of their daily life.
One more reason for purse wing such spot is that there is a lot of fame and moneyInvolved in them. they get attention by doing stunts and motorcycle in jumping from tall building. they makes headlines in newspapers and TV news channels. they feel great when the names comes in the world book. Once they get famous steak at a lot of money also. For instance many business isHire them to endorse their products. they also get jobs on the basis of such skills.
many steps can be taken to reduce the risk that involved. Firstly, this course should be done under strict supervision. All safety precautions should be taken such a sport should be full form after sufficient training and under supervision of adults.. sport companies which cater to such sports should require a license for providing such training. some people suggest banning us a good solution. we all know that forbidden fruits taste sweeter and people will do such sports in binding which would increase the risks involved.
To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that, people do such sports for fun, for money and for fame. However, such sports should be performed after sufficient training from licensed companies and under some supervision.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, while, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1655.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81104651163 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51030697122 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575581395349 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7371986185 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.9565217391 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9565217391 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.30434782609 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319892298582 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0848605674829 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0872207891366 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18565599477 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126691243795 0.056905535591 223% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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