Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?
To curb the crime is a major concern for the leaders and law enforcing agencies around the globe. It is observed that the criminals are increasingly committing crimes after the completion of their first sentence. There are several factors such as lack of rehabilitation, difficulty in finding regular employment can be attributed for this problem. There are a number of solutions which should be implemented to deal with this problem. This essay will discuss the possible causes as well as solutions to this social issue.
First of all, the reason why the offenders commit further crime after serving their first sentence is that they do not receive proper rehabilitation in the prison. In other words, the criminals are not given proper training to learn useful skills which they can apply later in their life. Furthermore, these people do not get appropriate lesson about moral behavior which can assist them in reshaping their life. The another cause why the criminals involve to crime again is that they face difficulties in getting employment. To be more specific, this people are not treated well by the society, as a result they do not get any work/job after finishing their imprisonment. Consequently, many of them face financial hardship which force them to involve in the crime again.
There are two effective solutions to this problem. One way to tackle this problem is to give proper training to all criminals in the prison. This will help them to learn valuable skills which will facilitate them in getting employment after finishing their sentence. By doing this, it will help them to reintegrate in the society and they might overcome the financial hardship. Another method of dealing with this problem is to have more supervision and checks in place when they will back in the society. This will hopefully prevent them from committing further crime as they are closely monitored.
In conclusion, lack of training during conviction as well as lack of supervision are the two factors which can be attributed for the tendency of convicts to involve in crime again. This problem of the society can be solved by giving opportunity of gaining valuable skills and ensuring proper monitoring after their punishment might be effective in solving this social problem. The authority should think of implementing these solution in order to get rid of this curse.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1984.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 390.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08717948718 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6959243108 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.448717948718 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 610.2 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7696239245 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36239903303 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117497154132 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065331408789 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237807652899 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300509327966 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.