Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Different successful corporations in this world are working constantly for the betterment of the society. Using a good public image and business strategy, they are also making a lot of profit. The prompt raises a controversial issue of whether the main purpose of a corporations is to promote well-being of the societies and environments or not. I strongly agree with the fact that it is the responsibility of every corporation to work for the well-being of the society and the environment in which they operate. Only making money should not be the only purpose of a corporation. There are some reasons for my stand to the given issue.
To begin, if any corporation works for the betterment of a society, people will appreciate them much. They also share with others that this corporations are doing good for the well-being of the society. In this way, a better image of the corporation grows up. To illustrate this point, let us look at an example. In our country, the Grameen Bank is doing a fantastic job for the poor by giving them small loan against a small interest. They are working for the betterment of the poor people. Because poor people have not enough money to start a business and alleviate unemployment. In this regard, Grameen Bank came forward. They offered small interest loan to the poor villagers. Many poor villagers in Bangladesh took their loan and became self-independent by starting their own firm. In this way, they contributed to the betterment of the society. They also received much appreciation from the outside world. Grameen Bank was also awarded Noble prize for their contribution to the society by removing poverty and unemployment. They also have started their branches to the other countries to work for the betterment of the poor people around the world. They also made a good profit by their ‘social business movement’. In this way we can see that not only they have made profit but also they worked for the betterment of the society. People also appreciated their work.
Furthermore, the purpose of only making money from the business without the betterment of the society gives a negative impact to the customers. In the long run, they will fall behind due to their lack of good image. From real life experience, we can see the fact. Many corporations in this world have failed due to their only money making purpose.
Finally, Corporations need to consider the environmental impacts when they operate in a region. If their waste pollution hampers the environment, the people and the society will suffer. People will not appreciate this type of work. They will urge the other people not to buy their product. Different international buyers takes the product of the corporations who maintain environmental safety. If they do not maintain the environmental safety, they will also their international market. So making money should not be the only purpose.
In conclusion, some argue that successfulness of a company depends upon only making a huge profit. However, without working for the betterment of the society and the environment they cannot be successful in the long run. So every corporation should work for the betterment of the society as well as making profit. Without making money or profit a company cannot sustain .So both is needed basically.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 265, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a corporation' or simply 'corporations'?
Suggestion: a corporation; corporations
...al issue of whether the main purpose of a corporations is to promote well-being of the societi...
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Line 1, column 358, Rule ID: AGREE_WITH_THE_FACT[1]
Message: Use simply 'agree that'.
Suggestion: agree that
...ies and environments or not. I strongly agree with the fact that it is the responsibility of every corpo...
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Line 3, column 136, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... much. They also share with others that this corporations are doing good for the wel...
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Line 9, column 370, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...money or profit a company cannot sustain .So both is needed basically.
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Line 9, column 372, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...ney or profit a company cannot sustain .So both is needed basically.
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Line 9, column 401, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t sustain .So both is needed basically.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, however, if, look, so, well, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 50.0 33.0505617978 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2766.0 2235.4752809 124% => OK
No of words: 551.0 442.535393258 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01996370236 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84493438435 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86374813072 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 215.323595506 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.410163339383 0.4932671777 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 851.4 704.065955056 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.38483146067 274% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 38.0 20.2370786517 188% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.882933807 60.3974514979 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.7894736842 118.986275619 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 23.4991977007 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.28947368421 5.21951772744 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 10.2758426966 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302095315264 0.243740707755 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845734265154 0.0831039109588 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646932554447 0.0758088955206 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195557834766 0.150359130593 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670668802831 0.0667264976115 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 14.1392134831 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 48.8420337079 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 12.1743820225 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.