Some people think it is good to raise children in a city. Others argue that it is better for children to grow up in the countryside. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Childhood is the most important stage of life cycle on development of personal life in all the areas. Group of people think that, the better place to get prior development of childhood is city while, some debate on the statement saying, countryside is the place to grow. In my opinion both views have own benefits, drawbacks, and it is up to the parents behavior and the attitude.
City life has more facilities and opportunities considering the physical environment. Preliminary education is most important on children and there are plenty of education institutes are available on city side not only having the physical resources but also the human resources with well background. For example, re schools are now conducting in English medium with various tools and children have opportunities to use technology on their education as a tool. However, the lack of social interaction is negative side of the city life when in growing stage.
On the other hand, villages’ social environment and the culture is not yet polluted. Countryside people still live is their own temper. Therefore, the competition is not exist and this could directly affect innovation and critical thinking aspect in childhood development. For example, lack of competition on preschools will not make good attitude on development and they will not meet or accompany to follow a role models in life except to the traditional villages. Moreover, considering the freedom to move with well-developed self-sustainable culture will provide good personal skills to develop on own skills.
Therefore, it can be seen that, both places have their own positives and negatives on child development. One can argue that, it could be nice place or not to raise child by considering the environment, facilities and tradition. However, I believe that, if elders can provide good guide on development from the birth, on their attitude and the behavior, location is not make big difference on childhood development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 347, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'parents'' or 'parent's'?
Suggestion: parents'; parent's
...enefits, drawbacks, and it is up to the parents behavior and the attitude. City life h...
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Line 3, column 171, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'existed'.
Suggestion: existed
...mper. Therefore, the competition is not exist and this could directly affect innovati...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1661.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25632911392 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04716930063 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528481012658 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8024800901 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.733333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208929531618 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614429153968 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474627746179 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113444147448 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538558783623 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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