Some people think it is good to raise children in a city. Others argue that it is better for children to grow up in the countryside. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
I believe that all that is learnt in the cradle lasts till the tomb. Like the two sides of a coin, there positive and negative aspects on raising children in a country side or in a city. I firmly believe that it is better to raise children in city rather than the latter.
On one hand, a few advantages of the city environments are that children are exposed to various experiences. Not only do they get accustomed the lifestyle, but also learn to use the opportunities that are available to them. On the other hand, they will have to live in a polluted environment. For Instance, I was born and brought up in a city. I am accustomed to visit various places for entertainment. Many parents upon realizing the positive aspects of city have moves from countryside to raise their children.
Countryside is known for its rich pasture and pollution-free environment. Quality of life can be expected for children being brough up there. Unlike cities, not only are the countryside not be easily accessible by roads but also, access to health care facilities may be limited. For example, my friend’s mother had to travel for an hour to get good medical care for her eye. There are only a handful of hospitals for millions of people scattered across vast areas in country side.
To conclude, I can strongly state that though city is polluted, it can mold children by exposing them to various experiences required for life. A child’s thinking perspective greatly differs based on where he is raised.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 349, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[4]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'accustomed to visiting'.
Suggestion: accustomed to visiting
...was born and brought up in a city. I am accustomed to visit various places for entertainment. Many ...
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Line 3, column 393, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'handfuls', 'handsful'?
Suggestion: handfuls; handsful
...ical care for her eye. There are only a handful of hospitals for millions of people sca...
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Line 4, column 220, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ly differs based on where he is raised.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1239.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78378378378 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8052524702 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594594594595 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.0783008145 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.4375 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1875 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189602318844 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593989589021 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411780662816 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109175742362 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.01679932264 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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