The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads.
Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use.
To what extent do you agree or disagree.
There is no gainsaying the fact is that the first automobile was found in 1888 after that the number of cars increased to about 29 million in 2000. I completely agree with the given statement. My views related to given statement would be hashed out in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, there are several reasons which justify to my opinion. First of all, traffic problems. To elaborate it, the problem of traffic is increasing day by day people prefer to use their own vehicles as compared to public transport. It can be lead the issue of accident. By enacting the laws to control ownership and use helps to reduce this snag
Secondly , rising the automobile vehicles on roads create the problem of pollution. To explain it, the motercars release harmful gases which mixed in air and pollute it which produce numbers of diseases such as heart disease, breathing problem and so on. So, people should encouraged to use other modes of transportation such as bicycle in order to mitigate this issue.
To conclude, having mulled over the aforementioned information it is clear that although cars is most useful means of transportation but it creates number of harmful effects.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, such as, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 985.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 198.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97474747475 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74142595694 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646464646465 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 506.74238477 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1027384082 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5454545455 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217556877691 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676131124849 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559356568797 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111611842694 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0254026687074 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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