Write a letter to your neighbor to say goodbye, as you decided to leave the area and move to a new home. In your letter say
- Explain why you are moving.
- What will you miss the most?
- Invite him/her to your new home.
Dear Emma,
I am writing this letter to say goodbye to you because I have made a decision that I leave this neighbourhood and move out to a new house.
Currently I have a new job and my new company is located 50 km away from the place where I live now, so I decided to settle down near my workplace. If I do not leave this area, I would spend much time on the road because it takes almost 1 hour to reach my office. That is the reason why I move out.
I will miss the most of the restaurants because new neighbourhood I will go have no Korean restaurant. As I am from South Korea, I enjoy to visit Korean restaurant in the area because their food is so nice. However, when I search some places around the new town online, there is no any similar restaurants that I want. I will really miss it particularly.
Once I organise all my stuff, I will invite you to come over my new home. Because it is bigger than the previous house and also there are an abundance of amenities to have fun such as recreation centre.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Best regards,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 132, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'enjoy visiting'.
Suggestion: enjoy visiting
...restaurant. As I am from South Korea, I enjoy to visit Korean restaurant in the area because t...
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Line 7, column 280, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...es around the new town online, there is no any similar restaurants that I want. I ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, really, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 880.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.23076923077 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47261255959 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605769230769 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4003028624 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9090909091 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264101965858 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0875825894049 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773265453091 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144470177902 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703755233778 0.0580467560999 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.25 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.65 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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