Crime among teenagers is increasing day by day. What sorts of punishment would you suggest for these children?
The use of drugs is a controversial topic in society today. It has spoiled dreams and aspirations of thousands of families. In general, addicts considers drugs as remedy to their sufferings whereas other are just doing it for fun. Youth usage of legal and illegal drugs are increasing at an alarming rate. It is claimed by sociologists that their closest family members and others surrounding them play a vital role in their interest for unhealthy addiction towards drugs. This essay will discuss possible causes and effects with actions that are necessary to be taken to prevent youths from abusing drug.
Beyond any qualms, there are several compelling reasons why youth is getting involved in drugs. First and foremost, many teenagers are taking drugs due to the fact that they want to be relieved from the family problems. These teens are stressed out with a bad family condition and the way to release it for them is to consume drugs. For example, their parent's marriage might not be working out well and could be in a divorce stage which leads to the disturbence in the personal space of the family. Secondly, many young people are using drugs because they live in an unsafe neighbourhood. They live in a society where as most of the adults are consuming drugs and drug dealers are moving around in the area. They could be friends with drug users and dealers and in the end, they will also consume the drugs. For example, In Punjab the reason of so much drug usage is mainly due to the supply of drugs by the drug peddlers in every area of the state. Therefore, easy access to drugs and lack of monitoring by the authority lead to drug abuse by many young.
Effects of these drugs can lead to the deteriotation of mental and physical health. As one of the serious effect is that some of these young people might not have enough money to purchase the drug, but as they are addicted to it, they would do anything to get it. They might steal things, become a thief or even rob a store as the crime rates would be high there. More fights and murders could be observed in such areas and there must be personal, social and generation related problems related to widespread drug abusing. Another effect of the drug is it may take the life of drug abusers. If drug abusers exchange the needle among friends, they are vulnerable to transmission of deadly disease like AIDS and HIV.
To wipe out drug from society educational programmes should be organised in school, colleges. Rehabilitation centres must be established to help addicted people. Advertisement of drugs, alcohol should be banned from the TV. Families should keep an eye on the bad companies as their teenagers are spending time with and finally the family bonding and understanding should be strong enough to discourage the teenagers not to do something that would bring shame for the family. Governments must ensure that their law enforcing organisations are working hard to wipe out the illegal drug businesses from the country and strict laws should be imposed and implemented to punish the illegal drug business people.
To conclude, drugs are the evil to all the sections of the society and the one spreading and encouraging it should be punished as they are responsible for the blood of the addicted people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, whereas, for example, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 36.0 13.1623246493 274% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 7.85571142285 280% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 82.0 41.998997996 195% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2717.0 1615.20841683 168% => OK
No of words: 567.0 315.596192385 180% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79188712522 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.87972968509 4.20363070211 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53865842569 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 285.0 176.041082164 162% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502645502646 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 842.4 506.74238477 166% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 16.0721442886 168% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6844362942 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.62962963 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.96296296296 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0746528938834 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0232349994926 0.084324248473 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0265424988199 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0511043202766 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0111310242958 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 78.4519038076 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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