Some people think that young people should follow the traditions of their society, and other think young people should be free to behave as they will. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In this era of globalisation, traditional values bring a sense of distinctiveness to nations around the globe due to their originality. Whereas numerous people are inclined towards the idea of youth must abide by customs and traditions, others, however, refuse this and believe in behavioural freedom. This essay will discuss both the viewpoints and will argue why youngsters should be left alone to make the right decision for themselves.
Proponents of traditional values may argue that such values have a logical reason behind them which should be followed by young people as well for their wellbeing. Indians, for instance, revere basil plants since ages and refer to it as a divine plant that should be protected at all costs. When a person looks at the medicinal values of the basil plant, it is crystal clear why preserving it is indispensable. Therefore, most of the customs and rituals have a deeper meaning instead of being rudimentary in nature at first, and youngsters should respect and follow these practices for the welfare of society.
On the other hand, I and many other people feel that imposing rituals and practices on the young generation would make them rebellious against them. Apparently, if society imposes certain customs on these young minds, they are potentially going to develop immunity towards them simply because most of the youth do not like to take directions straightway without exploring the path themselves. Hence, it is utmost important that the young generation should be given the freedom to reason the traditional values, analyse them and then decide to either welcome or reject them. Japan, for example, do not persuade its citizens to follow some rigid practices. Despite this freedom, the majority of Japanese stick to their values because they feel it is right to do so. Therefore, behavioural freedom is superior to forcing someone to follow some beliefs.
In conclusion, forcing traditional values would never be a potent way to preserve a country’s traditional heritage. Unless the young generation is given independence to make up their mind without any strain these traditional values might face rejection which would possibly make them redundant in the long run.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 117, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Unless” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...serve a country’s traditional heritage. Unless the young generation is given independe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, first, hence, however, if, look, may, so, then, therefore, well, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1870.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2380952381 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77790378611 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551820728291 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1398758562 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.666666667 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265568165656 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835841987181 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549604143876 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152883998219 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392139820121 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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