The qualities and skills that a person requires to become successful in today's world cannot be learned at a university or other academic institutions.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
As a few college dropouts have become millionaire, the millennials are becoming suspicious about whether to attend universities in order to be successful in this contemporary world. People may have doubts; however, I wholeheartedly agree that even if there have been certain exceptions, but university education is indispensable to climb up the corporate ladder.
Two main ingredients of success are persistence and determination and a student at a university is exposed to both from the freshman’s year. As soon as students start their degree or certification programs, they confront complex subjects and tight deadlines. During the learning process, learners ceaselessly try to overcome their weakness, ultimately cultivating an attitude to never give up and remain consistent even if the situations are seemingly unfavourable. During my bachelor’s degree, for instance, I had trouble comprehend Discrete Mathematics, but through persistence, I was able to score 80 marks in the final exam which shaped my perspective about how to handle problems in life. Therefore, going to an institute for tertiary education would prepare students to combat issues and achieve success in the long run.
Additionally, at a university or an institution, leaners get numerous opportunities to meet like-minded people and senior to develop friendship. Nowadays, no matter how exceptionally talented a person is, they would usually need references for securing a job offer. Since universities provide a chance do networking with not only peers but also professors or alumni, this would certainly come handy during job applications for reputed companies where reference section can make a significant difference in the credibility and employability of an applicant. Many a time, employers prefer an interviewee with an influential or trustworthy reference over the others who do not have such connections. Apparently, if attending universities can open a pathway to enter the professional world, the probability of getting a job and advancements are on the higher side certainly.
To conclude, even though a few people have achieved success without tertiary education, they relied on a team which was graduated from prestigious institutions. When a person spends 3 or 4 years in a university, assimilating life lessons from experience, they evolve as an individual and eventually learn what it means to be successful and how to be one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2069.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57681940701 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.37924346629 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644204851752 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 657.9 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.6396712503 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.785714286 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176794909231 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568308169759 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478298381325 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104336554326 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291396591695 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.38 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.12 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.