The qualities and skills that a person requires to become successful in today's world cannot be learned at a university or other academic institutions.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In today's technological era, one should have practical knowledge along with the study knowledge gained at universities. In these days, the qualities and skills that an person should acquire to meet a successful life cannot be gained at universities or any academic institutions. I totally agree to this argument and I will give my reasons in the following passage.
On one hand, every individual should think beyond their learnings. Also, one need to analyse what happens if we apply the techniques and methods that are learnt theoretically. For example, during certain times people who have been failed in their university studies may have the happiest life because of their skills and practical thinking in appliance of various methods. Nowadays, companies also prefer employees who are doing excel with their practical thinking and active towards their work. At the same time, people with good qualities and skills can adapt any kind of work.
On the other hand, some people are like just understanding the topic, but they cannot use those methods in their routine when they are required. For example, sometimes topper of a class during his university studies cannot have a happy and successful life because of just not having the practical knowledge. However, it is necessary for everyone to take some time before getting employed to gain knowledge and different kinds of work.
After having considered all the above discussed points, We can finally draw a conclusion that people need to have different thinking level and skills to lead a successful and happy life. It all depends on the individual about learning the advanced techniques and to know how to keep them in to use during their education.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 166, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ese days, the qualities and skills that an person should acquire to meet a success...
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Line 7, column 323, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... them in to use during their education.
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, may, so, for example, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17204301075 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67283558244 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569892473118 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7511314929 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169251878859 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595915209388 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700344631614 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10571520119 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678545309077 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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