You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems.
Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter:
• explain your situation
• describe your problems
• tell him/her when you think you can start.
Dear Sir\Madam,
I am writing this letter to request an extension on my joining date. My name is Harpreet, and i have been offered the position of IT Asset Manager at your organisation. Although i was considerably thrilled to join this job on the offered date, some personal emergency came up, which can not be avoided or postponed in any case.
As i have informed you that i have been staying temporarily at my friend's place for some time now, and It came to my knowledge yesterday that she will be leaving this place next week, so i have to look for a place to leave as well. In order to find suitable accommodation, i have to visit a few places myself and move there once i find a perfect shelter. Since this whole process would take a certain amount of time, it would not possible for me to join on the given date, which is due to the next week.
I will be available to start my job the next Monday. I hope it is feasible for you to make this amendment on my joining schedule.
Hoping to hear from you soon.
Yours sincerely
Harpreet
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir\Madam, I am writing this letter to request an e...
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Line 3, column 179, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... Manager at your organisation. Although i was considerably thrilled to join this ...
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Line 5, column 330, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...a few places myself and move there once i find a perfect shelter. Since this whol...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, well, in any case
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 873.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45408163265 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51390862366 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59693877551 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.7664381053 44.8134815571 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.7 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218401567173 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923824256277 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483233405481 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133913834314 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269850955892 0.0580467560999 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.53 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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