The children who grow up in a poor family can deal with problems in adult life than those brought up by wealthy parents. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
In recent years, problem-solving skill has been required in every aspects of our daily life. The idea that, impoverished adolescents can face with issues better than those who was pampered by high-income families remains a source of controversy. In my opinion, although I believe the power of money can create more opportunities for rich children to enhance their skills, I agree that those who are unconditional in finance can handle things and overcome obstacles.
One of the most popular character of poor children, which people can easily see in the daily life, is strong will. By non-stop endeavor, they overcame every challenges, gained lessons and day by day their skills was improved. A clear case of success through determination is Nick Vujicic, whose limbs are disabled. Although the absence of four limbs had brought so many difficulties for him, Nick successfully got over by his iron will and now he travels around the world as a motivational speaker. Moreover, he earned a bachelor degree both in accounting and financial planning. Simultaneously, Nick has his own family.
In the other hand, I don’t deny the importance of money. Whether low-income juveniles are determined or not, they still don’t have enough wealth to follow higher education to enhance their knowledge and skills. Education plays an essential role for human to develop. To be more specific, government pays a great deal of money to invest in education every year. Further more, I acknowledge that student must reach the issue thoroughly by adopting their knowledge at school and experiences in real life if they want to find the best solution.
In conclusion, either destitute juveniles nor rich student can solve troubles in the life of mature people.
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- The children who grow up in a poor family can deal with problems in adult life than those brought up by wealthy parents To what extend do you agree or disagree 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, still, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19787985866 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88762853076 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.678445229682 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3560655069 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0666666667 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8666666667 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53333333333 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147120848171 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0391215961155 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509000452917 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0850976216854 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712267586786 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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