People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems?
Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
More and more people are moving towards big cities. Although the concept behind their action is to live a better life but they experience numerous obstacles in day-to-day life. The main problems of living in larger cities include congested living space and higher transit time due to traffic congestion. There could be several solutions of this issues and state can build some establishments and facilities to attract people to stay at local towns.
The fast spaced life of big cities attracts people from all over the countryside either due to lucrative jobs or good schooling options. Most of them cannot afford to rent or buy a good size apartment or home for accommodation. As a result, people end up being living in very congested space and they will not have any privacy of themselves. Another problem which is worth to mention is very long and tiring commute time. Large city dwellers usually have automobiles (either car or motorbike) of their own and these means of transport can cause huge traffic congestion. Moreover, increased number of automobiles is also souse of green house gas like CO and CO2 which are major source of environmental pollution. Therefore, the inhabitants of big cities are exposing themselves to multiple obstacles by choosing to live there.
However, there are many possible solutions to these problems. One of them could be the involvement of the authority to attract these people to live regional town through building of local branches of corporations and schools. None of these people will have any reason to move towards larger cities if they have their secured and high paid jobs close to their house. Moreover, their children will get better education once government establishes good educational facilities. In addition, houses in countryside are bigger in size and also cheaper in price compare to cities. Therefore, people will enjoy big space, pure environment, good job and high quality education living in small towns.
In conclusion, city dwellers can face multiple problems which can be solved by the involvement of government in the form of building offices to create more jobs and schools for better education. These steps will encourage people to move regional towns.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1872.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17127071823 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69060773481 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544198895028 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1520335401 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5263157895 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0526315789 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94736842105 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252060651303 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738216126792 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048234165774 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163073914949 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0119533375647 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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