You recently received your grade from your instructor and you are dissatisfied with your score. Write a letter to your instructor and:
introduce yourself
let him know that you are dissatisfied with your grade
mention the reasons to convince him that you deserve a better grade
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my discontentment with the result of my recent assignment submitted to you last week.
My name is Harpreet, and i am one of the students of your English literature class. Last week, every student got a surprise assignment to prepare and submit within a week, and i got an assignment where i needed to structure all the notorious writers and poets with their areas of expertise, that is to century-wise with a summary of their achievements. Although it was a tough goal to achieve within a week, not only I finished it but also covered every necessary topic. while I did enormous amount of research on the internet, i explored every possible library in my area to make this project a success. However, today i received my grades, and unfortunately, i am not happy with the results. I am really astonished to see a C grade, while i expected no less then at least B+, which is quite reasonable.
Considering all the dedication and hard work, i feel that my finished project deserves a little bit more attention and extra grades. I would request you to please have a thorough check again and reconsider my results.
Thank you for your consideration. I am hoping to hear from you soon.
Regards
Harpreet
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 177, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...o prepare and submit within a week, and i got an assignment where i needed to str...
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Line 5, column 203, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...n a week, and i got an assignment where i needed to structure all the notorious w...
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Line 5, column 472, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...but also covered every necessary topic. while I did enormous amount of research on th...
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Line 5, column 529, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ous amount of research on the internet, i explored every possible library in my a...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... this project a success. However, today i received my grades, and unfortunately, ...
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Line 5, column 662, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... received my grades, and unfortunately, i am not happy with the results. I am rea...
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Line 5, column 742, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ally astonished to see a C grade, while i expected no less then at least B+, whic...
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Line 5, column 761, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[2]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...see a C grade, while i expected no less then at least B+, which is quite reasonable....
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Line 5, column 806, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...at least B+, which is quite reasonable. Considering all the dedication and hard ...
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Line 7, column 47, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ering all the dedication and hard work, i feel that my finished project deserves ...
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Line 7, column 90, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...eel that my finished project deserves a little bit more attention and extra grades. I woul...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, really, so, then, while, at least, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1053.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78636363636 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88777345669 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613636363636 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.3865456281 44.8134815571 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7272727273 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 4.34317383033 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179940848941 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742282929488 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0859606988159 0.0603063233224 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143782703709 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.098885311789 0.0580467560999 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.