Some people believe that hobbies need to be difficult to be enjoyable.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
A hobby is a regular activity done for enjoyment in leisure time. Certain voices believe that hobbies tend to be more difficult in order to enjoy them. I personally disagree with this statement because both the easy and extreme hobbies can be pleasurable.
On the one hand, many people enjoy easy hobbies. To explain this, people find enjoyment and interest to collecting stamps, drawing, reading books and may more these hobbies can be done without demanding physical activity. For example, the activity I like do so much is swimming. In this activity it requires very few equipment, very simple to learn and inexpensive. I never felt a challenging experience from swimming. I do this activity every weekend to escape from my stressful life.
On the other hand, some people find enjoyment only in demanding and challenging hobbies. The reason for this is they want to push their limits every time. For example, one of my friend nayan has hobby of dive in deep water from the height. He feels an adrenalin rush and dived from a different level of height every time. This activity more difficult and challenging and he enjoys a lot.
In conclusion, simple hobbies can be fun and relaxing, but difficult hobbies can be equally pleasurable for different reasons. I personally believe that everyone has his own interest.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 314, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[6]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun equipment seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'little equipment'.
Suggestion: little equipment
...ming. In this activity it requires very few equipment, very simple to learn and inexpensive. ...
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Line 5, column 389, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lt and challenging and he enjoys a lot. In conclusion, simple hobbies can be fun...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 5.60731707317 410% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1109.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 221.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01809954751 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66649092055 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556561085973 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 283.868780488 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.6815803863 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.3125 112.824112599 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8125 22.9334400587 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9375 5.23603664747 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 3.70975609756 323% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25969995667 0.215688989381 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863556458292 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467253378941 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17369952218 0.15604864568 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384589201858 0.0819641961636 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.2329268293 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 61.2550243902 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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