Advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday life. is it positive or negative development?
It is true that we are increasingly surrounded by advertising on a daily basis. From my perspective, the development of adverts brings both benefits and drawbacks.
It is clear that there are several advantages of advertisements. Firstly, advertisings give people having more choices. Among many similar products, numerous information provided by advertisements, customers can decide which is the best product to purchase. For example, every individual has his or her own facial skin feature, thus choosing an appropriate cosmetic for their faces is very important, thanks to those adverts, they may know more characteristics of products, as a result, avoid buying the wrong goods causing skin irritation. Secondly, effective advertisings assist companies to sell their goods dramatically. Eventually, it boosts firms’ revenue significantly, Samsung is a typical example of its success through advertisings.
On the other hand, advertisings also have some disadvantages. Some individuals are currently persuaded to follow the latest trends. For instance, whenever Apple releases the newest phone, many queueing a few hours just to buy the latest model even when they already have a good phone that does not need replacing. under this circumstance, it can be seen that some people are encouraged to associate certain brands with a higher status, not only because of products’ quality but also simply to show off, this tendency causes an impulse buying. These days, more and more teenagers splurge on iPhone 11, just simply want to brag about their wealth because they can own the newest phone of the most well-known brand in the world, Apple. Consequently, these youngsters put pressure on parents even though their parents can not afford to purchase it.
In conclusion, individuals may gain both considerable benefits and drawbacks through the growing prevalence of advertisements
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1609.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56747404844 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11498644099 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.681660899654 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.8096244228 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.266666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125970237625 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424834206753 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546845956953 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0722715993827 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0204441343962 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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