Being famous has advantages and disadvantages , discuss and give your opinion
it is often argued that juvenile delinquency is proliferating rapidly in the majority of cities. this essay describes the possible causes behind this trend and also suggest some remedies to curb the menace.
The prime reason endorsing the view is a lack of income n their young age. Indeed most children not able to get enough education as they fall below the poverty line, and they cannot afford the higher amount of fees. Because of this, they not able to complete their sufficient career course and it results in fewer income jobs. Hence, to fulfill their basic needs individuals follow other wrong tracks of earning money such as robbery, kidnapping, or killing someone for their wealth. For example, it was published in economic times that in the Asia, approx thirty percent of teenagers who had caught for any offenses are educated, young professionals.
many steps can be taken to overcome this situation. The most prominent way is through awareness campaigns and increasing the number of vacancies. The law agencies can impose a full subject pertaining to this in academics of offsprings so that they can learn this thing from childhood. Besides this, the government has to ensure that each year openings should be created to control the crisis of revenue. for instance, In The UK, many public corporations have cut down the ration of crime by providing work to many people who are suffering from poverty and making them successful humans of society.
In conclusion, although adult delinquency is extremely difficult to abate in the near future, effective control can only be ensured by harmonized actions of both government and citizens.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, hence, if, so, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12546125461 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63163021609 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660516605166 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0751944321 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.846153846 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0313048831297 0.244688304435 13% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0124253856436 0.084324248473 15% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0232410166579 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0197907500521 0.151304729494 13% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0198549157774 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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