Many people are opting for holistic medicine rather than conventional medicine as a form of treatment for incurable diseases.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of such practice?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
Write at least 250 words.
There is no denying the fact that the phenomenon of holistic medicines over the standard medicines is ubiquitous across the globe due to its paramount importance. One school of thought opines that it is worthless; however, others consider that a couple of problems also occur because of the same. Although this has a plethora of merits yet numerous demerits are also there which will be elaborated in upcoming paragraphs.
On the one hand, there are a number of incurable diseases such as last stage cancer, heart diseases, and AIDS which are affecting the society adversely. People prefer to buy the holistic medicines because they thought it is cheaper than allopathy medicines which are affordable for them to purchase. Moreover, they believe in the words amateur holy person. In addition, superstitious can be a major aspect that relates to modern society these days, so people must pay close attention to it. For example, for curing cancer, there are various ayurvedic medicines are available but they do not guarantee whether the patient is treated or not. Although, they do not know the consequences of it.
On contrary, with the advancement of technology, there are numerous improvements that are done in the medical fields. Now, standard medicines have a solution for curing diseases like last stage cancer. They do with the help of chemotherapy which is expensive and very rare people can afford it. However, the government also helping cancer patients by providing them funds for it. For instance, according to a recent survey, nearly 55% of cancer patients are cured with the help of chemotherapy and immunotherapy. Therefore, people of a country would prefer conventional medicine instead of holistic medicine.
In conclusion, many people are opting for holistic medicine rather than conventional medicine as a form of treatment for incurable diseases. It has now been shown that not only holistic medicines influence society, but standard medicines also can too. It is expected that allopathy will continue to increase in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 641, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... whether the patient is treated or not. Although, they do not know the consequences of i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1728.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25227963526 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81316802215 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54103343465 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2016379932 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2777777778 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94444444444 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314233698735 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0993967671522 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136336606911 0.0667982634062 204% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210378590629 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125580812156 0.056905535591 221% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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