Nowadays the way people interact with each other has changed because of technology.
In what ways has technology affected the types of relationship people make?
Has this become a positive or negative development?
In these days and age, we all know that technology ruling all over the world. Technology paly an indispensable role in the way human beings interact with each others. Nowadays, people can connect with epic number other human beings. Although there are some demerit of technology, numerous merits which lasting eye catching effects on individuals.
There are immense approaches by which technology change relationship among people. Firstly, the most overwhelming manner is that now people can reach to more number of people compar to past. For an example, in current era individual make more friends as well as relative on social media sites. In addition, people keep the ball rolling and expand their online business. Moreover people become extremely extrovert owing to this technology.
Despite of some negative effects, people concentrate more on positive side of technology. There are tremendous positive effect here I will concentrate on one of the most important is people can interact with anyone at anytime. For an instance, by using the electronic gadgets like computer people make their life more durable then past as it lead a positive development. Furthermore, at present due to the mobile phone people can do your work at any place which is more convenient them.
To conclude this view, technology is now become significant to connect with anyone as well as people can connect frequently to eachother. Due to the technologies positive development occur all over the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, well, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1256.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27731092437 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7651400645 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609243697479 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.5355090457 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.7333333333 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8666666667 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356367343224 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112540887582 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623452604038 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20941877708 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269408690895 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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