The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian households. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.
The first pie graph gives information about the 6 sources of usage of energy in all Australian dwellings. The next one demonstrates the proportion of greenhouse gases which are released by the mentioned usages.
It is clear that meanwhile, citizens in Australia consumed energy in more than 40 proportion in heating which had smaller percentage of greenhouse gases emissions with 15%, the greatest amount of emissions were from water heating that were used 30% of energy.
The biggest energy usages was allocated to heating with 42% and the other largest one was water heating which was consumed 30% of energy. But there were another sources which had small proportion like other appliances with 15%, 7% in refrigeration. At the end, lighting and cooling consumed energy in 4%, 2% respectively.
In figure 2, two main sources with near percentage were devoted to water heating with 32% of greenhouse gas emissions and the other one was for other appliances with 28%. Both heating and refrigeration had near proportion with 15% and 14% respectively. As like the usage of lighting and cooling which were low, their emissions were less than 10 proportion with 8% for lighting and 3% for the other one.
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- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both views and give your own opinion 78
- Universities should allocate the same amount of money to students sport activities as they allocate to their libraries Do you agree 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, so, well, while, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1011.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08040201005 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75460318212 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502512562814 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 298.8 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.836056576 43.030603864 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.333333333 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1111111111 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88888888889 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133999752698 0.215688989381 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646489562972 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045511429768 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104136101738 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441764058329 0.0819641961636 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.