Some people think it’s better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Others believe that it’s good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Success of an individual is relative to the environment and people surrounding him, as to sustain life
one ought to be in a circle of people and humans satiate this social requirement by the way of
developing friendship. Our friends plays an significant role in our lives, as we tend to learn, enjoy and
grow with our mates, thus it very well justifies to have friends of both opinions, one in our favour
and other against, as its pertinent for developing ones personality.
Throughout our life cycle, we tend to develop friendship with different set of people mainly while
pursing education and then later in our professional life. Generally, the likings, interests and basic
human nature among friends are common, it is quite normal to notice that group of friends carry
same sought of opinion about life and that is the reason majority of the time, a set of people having
friendship ends up into similar professions and same sought of lifestyle. India’s best cricketers Sachin
Tendulkar and Vinod Kambli were childhood mates and pursued their careers in same field.
At the same time, having friends who generally disagree on few occasions, do help oneself to
understand and realize the reason behind the criticism, as it sometimes helps in self-realisation and
accordingly one may bring desired changes in personality to succeed in life. But unfortunately,
people having different opinions may end up their friendship as well. Our Bollywood stars Salman
Khan and Shahrukh khan were very genuine mates at one point of time, but later due to difference
in opinions, they ended up in the biggest rivalry of the film industry.
To recapitulate, having friends who carry similar opinions tend to support and motivate to achieve
success in life, but at the same time having friends who opposes, adds up to developing some vital
personality traits which our attained only with criticism.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 42, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...eveloping friendship. Our friends plays an significant role in our lives, as we te...
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Line 5, column 52, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...gainst, as its pertinent for developing ones personality. Throughout our life cyc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, if, may, so, then, thus, well, while, as to, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 17.0 6.8 250% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 5.60731707317 392% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 33.7804878049 163% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1620.0 965.302439024 168% => OK
No of words: 312.0 196.424390244 159% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19230769231 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 3.73543355544 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79166482675 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 106.607317073 165% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564102564103 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 283.868780488 176% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.9263224048 43.030603864 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 180.0 112.824112599 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.6666666667 22.9334400587 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11111111111 5.23603664747 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 20.0 3.83414634146 522% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248541003438 0.215688989381 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106042053085 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876003159297 0.0843802449381 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0749768178855 0.15604864568 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0800082468874 0.0819641961636 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.3 13.2329268293 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 61.2550243902 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 10.3012195122 161% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 40.7170731707 206% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.4329268293 171% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.0658536585 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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