Some people believe that traditional music album and single consumption is vital for the music industry. On the other hand, others think that digital streaming and downloading play bigger roles. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience Write at least 250 words.
Entertainment has become an integral part of human’s life cycle, since ages mankind have been
inventing newer sources of entertainment, Cinema being one of the most preferred among these.
For the past century, Cinemas are considered as the most successful and popular channel of
entertainment for us, though people got hold of a substitute with introduction of smartphones and
tablets, but as per my opinion, the experience one feels through Cinema is still incomparable.
Cinema halls have played a pivotal role in introducing a new industry all through, popularly known as
Film Industry. This industry not only gave birth to multiple stars and actors by the way of displaying
their talent, but also been serving a medium for livelihood of million technicians, distributors, play
back singers and petty artists. Movie Halls have been influential in creating an overall experience for
the audiences, not only by displaying a big screen but also by creating Dolby sound effects. Further
in recent years, the film industry has revolutionised the concept by introducing Multiplex, wherein
the whole experience have been improvised with better sitting comfort and facilities like a fully air
conditioned halls, refreshments options and different movies displayed at multiple screens offering
choice to the consumer.
On the contrary, smartphones and tablets have provided consumers with a cheap and flexible
medium to explore the world of entertainment. Not only, we can sit back at our place and watch any
movie of our choice at any time, but also it has been the reasonable option providing variety of
movies and individual privacy too. Though with smartphone’s invent, there been a major issue
arising termed ‘piracy’, but still it is considered a favourite option to watch films and movies.
To conclude, smartphones and tablets are responsible for the shift in consumer preferences sighting
overall benefits, but Cinemas still holds charm among audiences considering the overall visual experience it serves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, by the way, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1742.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54777070064 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02441147823 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59872611465 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.7510784223 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 174.2 106.682146367 163% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.4 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 21.0 4.38176352705 479% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0737252220347 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0310514871503 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0297804646299 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0223920917556 0.151304729494 15% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274672212374 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.4 13.0946893788 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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